Thursday, September 23, 2010

Thesis Sentence failure and Cupcakes!


This week in senior project we turned in our thesis and four sources. I had changed my topic to rather vegetarian diets are healthier than other diets and found 5 good sources with the help of Mrs. Price.  I decided my view opinion was that vegetarian diets were healthier than other diets because of various things such as it lowers cardio vascular disease, different types of cancer, and lowers obesity and cholesterol.  And the other side was that vegetarians do not get enough protein from the meat and often vegetarians just eat junk food instead of a health meal with mean. But I got a C because my topic appeared to be broad and not arguable.  So I am back at square one tying to find another topic.
Also this week I had my third week of cake decorating class. We learned how to fill cupcakes and make different kinds of flower, designs, and leaves. It was a lot of fun again. We learned a lot. Then after the class, Mrs. Halla, my mentor and I went to her house and finished decorating all the cupcakes to give to the class for Natalie’s birthday. It took a lot of time but it was fun to use our creativity and try new and different designs on the cupcakes. It was fun to experiment and try everything we have been learning. I am already excited about next week. 

2 comments:

  1. Sorry to see you struggling with this. "Healthier" is in itself a nebulous term and very difficult to measure because there are so many variables that determine health, not just diet. Some of the worst junk food addicts appear healthy and thin but who knows what lurks within. You may want to brainstorm about learning to cook to find a topic. Not too long ago girls were required to take "home economics" in high school. Now it seems to be a dying art.

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  2. I hope you have found the new the one you can find thesis we established to be one you can find good research on!

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